Thursday, September 8, 2016

Maui and the sun.

Wednesday 15 June 2016


Maui and the sun.



A long time ago in a country called Aotearoa. They was a maori warrior name Maui he lived with his brothers in a village.


Every day Maui and his brothers got up early in the morning before the sunrise to go and enjoyed fishing and planting vegetables. They did this to feed themselves and the villagers. The villagers were happy because they had food to feed themselves. Maui and his brothers were happy too.

As time went on the days went shorter and shorter. This made Maui and the villagers angry  had less time to plant vegetables and fish. They was now less food for them to eat. Maui and his brothers the villagers became very angry. So Maui and his brothers and the villagers with the sun because it was setting very early. They decided to teach the sun a lesson. They decided

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Liam,
    Great to see your writing about Maui and the Sun. I want to read what happened next... I like the way you added a relevant image. You could add a label of writing.
    Whaea Maria

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